hi welcome to my blog today we were adding to a sentence to make it interesting I hope you enjoy
The music was loud
The music was annoyingly loud .
In the Afternoon the music was loud .
The music was loud because of Nigel .
In the afternoon the music was annoyingly loud because of Nigel .
In the afternoon the music was annoyingly loud because of Nigel.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, April 8, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Ella, I thought this post was about music but it is a poem! I like the way you add words in each sentence- maybe we could use this in Drama. Drama/ Drama with Ella/ Drama fun with Ella/ Drama fun with Ella's smiles. Hope to see you in drama- Musical-Theatre Sports-Shakespeare Festival :)
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